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life 2 min read 633 views Feb 19, 2015

Grayscale

God asked me what I like

the most about earth

I said earth I'm still falling 

head first and to make 

things worst i refused to jump 

so you pushed me 

ever since then i've been trying 

to get over the hump in the mist 

of the fall i've heard a lot of thumps

like the closing of coffins

the dead don't come here often 

I couldn't tell God everything

 like thanks God for the cocaine 

it helped a lot to cope with the pain

oh, and the seed that made 

the good weed and the time

I was cut and didn't bleed

is it wrong to be grateful for everything 

but outside of that is complain 

what is there to explain to the 

all knowing everything I made 

no plans for tomorrow coz 

I'm having a busy day 

moving stuff around that was 

left in my way like tools

to build a bridge and get over it 

just to build another hoping 

that perhaps somewhere 

in between crossing 

I will again meet my mother 

half way to opening the heart of my soul 

before the closing of day 

and the breaking of ground 

there is no heaven to be found 

beyond the profound 

I have gotten up I have

dropped down and though I

have touched I have not hit 

the ground but if its all the same

thanks God for the ring of flames

I like the fact that i didn't get

eaten by that alligator 

and that one time when you

delivered me from that stuck elevator

I forgot the question so God 

ask me later it's hard to 

choose a color coz its all 

black and white to me

 

 

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tretre

This poem made me think, Which I like. Always keep that pen movin WizeDom!!!

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TIGHT Capture......WOW (is all I can say smh)

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