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just different 1 min read 627 views Feb 22, 2015

To be or be got

If they can make you believe then you believe in make-believe made up stories backed up without a lead setting the stage for the curtains to fall leaves us standing in the thought of it all sold on what we will buy before we even try to see if it’s a lie why does the new milk make the baby cry? the diagnoses comes from the other side two taps later the child dies the one who comes to comfort the mother is a spy this story unfolds like clean sheets so new there are still pleats what has been written is not for the weak only the strong will succeed we know that a process straightens the tangles beneath a weave the course is the root that leads us Toward the path of our dreams taste it if you do not believe looks like pudding could be ice cream to be or to be got which one will you be?

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hymnagen

A call to action! I choose to be ...armed with a pen and a pad. Tight one, Wize

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Brilliant.....Write On!!

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