Broken Love
She said she wouldn't go back
go back to the black and blue
and the blues hold the clues
the clues shed light on her ruse
her ruse all covered in bruises
in bruises he chooses to speak
to speak is the way to get beat
get beat down so low
so low she's scared to go solo
go solo is what her friends know
friends know what's best
what's best lead to a bullet in her chest
her chest where her last breathe rests
where they all rest in pieces
pieces of a broken love
a broken love that never lives.
love that never lives
never lives.

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This is an excellent write.
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Really creative structure! The repetition drives the message home. Outstanding
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Powerful. Great writing.
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Poignant penning....well crafted...thanks for sharing!!
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Amazing
Read VomitOutTheMouth's poemslove_supreme
Very nice
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