Success had an Odor
Hmmm I smell it...
Mmmm there it is...
Success...but its
Constipated with the adrenaline to...
escape but
It feels the source of fear that domanates its move
so it
stays in place
Hmmm there it is
Displayed on someone else's show case
Flourish with maximum exposure
Mmmm I smelt did
But I was limited by minimum odor

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Success can stink if the path taken to it is foul. A shame how some don't care how they get there. Tight capture
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Nice work. I hear you. Write on.
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Very nice
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