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life 1 min read 377 views Mar 1, 2015

Success had an Odor

Hmmm I smell it...

Mmmm there it is...

Success...but its

Constipated with the adrenaline to...

escape but

It feels the source of fear that domanates its move

so it

stays in place

Hmmm there it is

Displayed on someone else's show case

Flourish with maximum exposure

Mmmm I smelt did

But I was limited by minimum odor

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hymnagen

Success can stink if the path taken to it is foul. A shame how some don't care how they get there. Tight capture

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LP45

Nice work. I hear you. Write on.

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love_supreme

Very nice

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