General Admission...Free
General Admission was the cost with no price
The all access pass had the price
but it was unrestricted
No one entered since there was nothing playing
But the all access pass had the price
No one entered since there was nothing playing
But the all access pass had the price
The one entered
won the opportunity to have forever general admssion
to act like she had since
Her all access pass
was her dream on the screen
as she starred in the motion picture
of General Admission
Giving thanks that her spirit listened
and God was the price
and charged her
with a new Life

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Nice way to flip this spiritual vibe
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Thanks friend! You do an excellent job in your art as well.
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Excellent Capture
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