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just different 3 min read 317 views Mar 8, 2015

that night prt1

Background: in a dark room with one light on there are four chairs for the main characters

Main characters are: shantin, gizmo, night wolf, and an unknown voice. Now let the story begin Shantin: what is the purpose of living this meaningless life?

  Gizmo: I just want to be left alone without the consistent responsibility of life and having to take care of the people that I care for

Night wolf: the reason why you two are tired of life is because you surround yourselves with meaningless actions

Unknown: no patient’s no faith no stability what are you doing these things for do you even know anymore let’s be real this won’t be leaked out to anybody I promise

Gizmo: my only purpose for living is to be left alone this world is just filled with people who hurt other people it’s a damn shame how life works

Shantin: I can’t even begin to express how confused I am we were born just to die and go to heaven or hell depending on our actions

  Night wolf: maybe there is something more to it than that. Shantin have you ever talked to god before

Shantin: not really.

Unknown: people let’s start from the beginning of all this confusion I want you to give me a brief summary about yourselves night wolf you first

Shantin: why does he get to go first??

Gizmo: does it even matter?! Stop being such a cry baby

Night wolf: (whispers) hater

Shantin: what!?

Night wolf: oh nothing (giggles) my name is night wolf I have no age and I am positive I was born on a fall moon I have very sharp teeth I’m 6’2 my favorite color is blood I love howling at the moon and hearing my victims scream before I rip them limp from limp

Unknown: umm not quite what I was looking for how about someone’s whose a little more human and a lot less scary

Night wolf: aw fiddles sticks I was just getting to the best part  

Gizmo: I’ll start first I am a shield and sword to those I love and care about I love fighting smoking and drinking you can catch me in some cargos and a v-neck anytime where I was born I have no idea. ...

night wolf: (sharping his teeth)

gizmo: =_= sorry that I'm boring you.

night wolf: lmfao my bad continue.

shantin: (smirks)

gizmo:you know what...fucc both of yall the both of you should be very fortunate I didn't kill you yet

shantin: tf I didn't even do anynothing lil

night wolf:make a move gizmo! make a move I dare you I double dare you!!

unknown: all of you are acting childish shut up!  and respect when another person is talking or god so help me I'll... (balds fist) gizmo continue gizmo:uhh yeah I'm done (shakiness in his voice)

shantin:fine I'll go. well I'm 21 my favorite color is blue I have a side that no one with the exception of gizmo has ever seen and I'm afraid of dying but I often fantasize about how I will past away.

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