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erotic 2 min read 476 views Mar 9, 2015

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This was a twisted night,

I looked naughty at her sight,

He brought me a sexy scrumptious babydoll,

Where I took her fully on demand,

Commanded us to kiss,

I felt her lips speak on mines wanting me to make her mine,

He watched us unravel into one of his prolonged fantasies,

In my mind I felt amoral,

But every part of me love the entertainment of pleasure we had,

The night aroma smelled like grapefruit,

And she tasted like a sugar cane,

Such a bittersweet moment,

Move baby move,

Slow baby slow,

She did by my every word,

I had to much control on her,

Like she was my little voluptuous puppet,

That night it should've last longer,

Her curvy body so addictive to hold,

Her heartbeat so quietly beating to match mine,

The way she looked at me as if I brought her back to life of happiness,

I noticed how she fell for me more than I care for her,

But I noticed how I fell for him more,

We made it clear how we felt that night,

He made it clear how he liked it,

Will I ever be the same without her,

Or is it the two that makes finally makes me complete.

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2b2b2

Damn this is good....Great Capture....Wow...(nervously lol..guess I like it too)

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recklessmonet

Lol, interesting. I wonder what the answer to the question is.

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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