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romance 1 min read 468 views Mar 11, 2015

The sack from the past

  • ​In the heart of the night... Mental fencing with a woman of substance.
  • A woman aware... A soul that has trusted.
  • The bruise of betrayal.. The pierce of disloyalty.
  • Her touch was seductive, but her spirit destroyed me.
  • Immense emotion, buried in an ocean of silence....
  • Heart throbbing, visions getting vocally violently.
  • Carrying that sack of insecurity.... For years.....
  • Admiring this new soul of purity... In fear...
  • Fear of what and of how and for why.
  • Is giving "i" up for an "us" worth the try?
  • Next to nothing,the basic mate can be found.
  • Only in hunting, can a moan be a growl.

 

 

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twistedbeauty

very beautiful piece

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tretre

This poem is deep..Or I could be over thinking it. Either way I loved it. Keep that pen movin, KonsciousKing!!!

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2b2b2

Superb....Deep Share....Bravo

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Charles2

Sounding like a dangerous encounter, on both ends... Dropping the veil of convenience, the duality of desire, comes forth. We all are beings of shifting, sometimes conflicting priorities... we evolve. Training our sights... perfecting the recipe ...for happiness... or the like. Our minds return and replay memorable sequences... the bullets make it seem like a war room mission briefing ...or debriefing

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love_supreme

I like this poem.

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