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life 1 min read 552 views Mar 21, 2015

tell me

look at me and tell me all of the things you see

tell me how i make you feel and all of the things you want me to be for you

tell me all of your fantasies

allowing me to be only one you desire

look at me and tell me all the beauty you see without any make up on and my hairs undone

look at me and tell me

everything you want to say

not because i want to you to but because you honestly feel that way

tell me on your own timing

im listening

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love_supreme

I completely agree with this poem. A man stops being a man when he stops noticing.

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KingQadarDwon'

I digging this.... Nice write, keep posting..

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Ms.PoeticPassion

I like this.....and I totally agree with Latin_lover;a man stops being a man when he stops noticing. Nice write

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Charles2

what you see in another tells a lot about yourself. beauty is whatever you think is important. how someone makes you feel is what you think about when you are around them, without thinking about it

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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