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erotic 2 min read 460 views Mar 23, 2015

Cold/Hot

The winds blowing against my face Step after step I take against the cold breeze My body in turbulence I can't control this feel My heart pounding My palms sweaty in a rough way Can I breathe Can I fly . Can I get soared away To a place where peace and love engulfs my being The way you touch my body brings hot shivers to my feline spine I curve my back to give you more of me Do you understand the placement I've given u in my space??. This space I call my temple With 3 beautiful corners The points connect to make a unperfect circle to u... Wanting to be forever intertwined with you Our fingers lock to eternity Then i start feeling darkness I bleed black sand from my finger tips I'm drenched in hot lava Yet I feel as cold as ice Laying in a curdle of coal Burning every breathe u moan down my body Shaking every vein through my skin It's inevitable this feeling coming from within is gonna end Everything ends arises to fall We laugh to cry We fight to love We survive to live I'm walking step after step against this cold wind....

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love_supreme

This is an excellent write.

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love_supreme

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