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detroitfred
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lightness in the dark
Found a few poems I haven't seen in a while.

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It started with a drink

A drink lead to a dance

A dance made me think

My thoughts led me to you

You were suddenly my intoxication

I'd take shots of your words until I was poisoned.

Gallon after gallon I'd drink until I couldn't

And when I'd throw up I felt unknown relief

So I when I threw up

I went back to that drink

And went back to that dance

And found solace in you

My poison, yet my relief

The good nights, and my grief

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twistedbeauty says:

nice write.

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Tight Flip....ONE

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Ak rio says:

Nice write bro

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