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life 1 min read 548 views Mar 26, 2015

unfinished

i begin

and

somewhere in the middle it just ends

i feel its incomplete

i set it aside thinking

i'll come back to it

the poem just sits in my notebook unfinished

the feeling isnt there anymore

i guess that was it way this one ends

years pass and i havent made progress

loose leaf paper crumbled tossed in a folder

tucked away in a bag

never to see the light of day again

until i feel like finishing

what i started long ago

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ms.poeticpassion

I like this....I have many poems unfinished. Then I go back and read them and be like hmmmm..maybe that is the way it is suppose to end. It sounds better after I let it marinate for a Lil while lol

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ms.poeticpassion

I like this....I have many poems unfinished. Then I go back and read them and be like hmmmm..maybe that is the way it is suppose to end. It sounds better after I let it marinate for a Lil while lol

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twistedbeauty

Yes I have a few hundred laying around lol I had a poem from 5 years ago that I just finished last week

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hymnagen

I can definitely relate, The piece I posted today was one I revisited to complete from the first 3 lines. You really captured it well

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love_supreme

I like this poem.

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