Still in love with you
I am still in love with you
what am I to do
Still in love with you
My mind is unfocused
I try to fix what you left broken
put my feelings in the open
Nightly dropping to my knees
Once invincible
Now I feel weak
And I cant breathe when I lay down to go to sleep
You promised you would ride
You left your soldier here to die
Lately stuck on my mind the times we shared
I dared to leave a message on your phone
Ended with something you should know to be true
Baby I am still in love with you
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Nice write! After reading it I had to write a woman's version...lol #random thoughts I'm still in love with you too I just can't get over the things you use to do. Yeah....I miss you calling me "BOO" Where's the other woman you use to DO?! With her you spent your nights...lyine to me "baby I'll be home before midnight." Blinded by love..my response would always be AllRight Falling to my knees wondering should I stay or stray away.. I'm still in love with you and I don't know what to do. I can't breathe~ This pain is suffocating me~ I can't sleep right... I can't eat right.. I can't speak right... You were my everything. Left me for a one night fling. My world was you and I forever living a beautiful life, But you made that sacrifice. Now you looking all sad....this feeling is nothing nice. I'm still in love with you And I don't know what to do. Wondering should I pick up the phone and call you? I'm still in love with you.
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I love this!!! I truly understand the feeling! Great write!!!
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Hot spit, Ak Rio! Only made better by Ms.PoeticPassion's response. If I was you -with her permission, of course- I'd click the "Edit" button and add her piece. IJS
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@ poetic passion we collab sometime And nice addition to this write, it kinda got rhe ring of a R
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@deelite me thanx I'll be sure to You out
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@hymagen I agree she did her thing on the remix lol
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I would love to collab
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I love this it just make smile and happy to see a man share his feelings, it shows a man.
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I love this it just make smile and happy to see a man share his feelings, it shows a man.
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Thank yu all for the feedback!
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