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just different 1 min read 410 views Apr 4, 2015

Me & Myself

Two swimmerrs, one dilemma, one could'nt swim, tired of losing to the other he decided he'll win, hopped in the water and started to drown, because he paniced, he was'nt ready to franic, and bound, the good swimmer seen his predicament and went in after, but stayed adrift from him awhile and could'nt contain his laughter, then he saved his good friend he thought it was all his fault, he did'nt teach him how to swim when he asked to be taught, spectators all around when they reached the shore, one asked a question because he was'nt sure, why did you wait to save him before, the good swimmer replied, I had to wait until he stopped  fighting himself or we both could've died, God works in a similiar way, he helps those that helps themselves and pray,

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