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life 1 min read 477 views Apr 8, 2015

Failed Human Accomplishments

She said take care of this lil situation,

She's see a spot,

I see an over filled tub needing me in it,

At such an young age still a child,

You expect me to be fully experienced to your life game,

We're two different kinds,

You're equivalent to everybody I see,

I'm just a species out on her own,

Already filled with pressure from eyes criticizing me to do better,

And you become an outsider filling my head with fantasizing lies,

As I believe you foolishly,

Enough of the bitterness of spilled milk,

More like wanting to butcher my head off from a spilled drip of red wine,

Poor, and lost is what you cherish of me,

It's the only door you can walk through and drag your foot over me like a door mat,

From your lil baby to an unsuccessful gift you should've left closed,

Every hurdle I try to jump over,

You trip making me fall on my face,

Banging my brain making me consciously realize I'm just a server to humanity,

Cut me off from this gang chain and I promise I'll be the best worker to human kind,

... Of achieving my dreams within myself.

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love_supreme

Inspiring write. Keep that pen flowin'

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Brilliant Piece.....Bravo....ONE

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