“Pen wouldn't move til now Current eventz got me feelin some kinda way”

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just different 1 min read 786 views Apr 11, 2015

Our Last Dance

She line dances –

 

Sliding electrically,

 

guided by telepathy.

 

She moves along so effortlessly

to the song my heartbeat’s drumming composes.

 

I hold her in my hand and we slow dance like lovers

as she draws out of my mind the brilliant colors

of divine melodic movements.

 

We’ve done this before.

 

The steps she takes across the floor

leave in her wake a trail of beauty.

 

Although I lead, it is she that moves me,

and with every dance we share she improves me.

 

We re-enact Roberta‘s melancholy hit.

We two shall dance no more as she expires softly in my grip.

So I lay her down to rest as she punctuates my script

for the last time with her last breath…

 

a drop of ink.

 

-HymnAgen

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KingQadarDwon'

Fiyah penning and some extraordinary wordplay bro.... Thanks for sharing

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hymnagen

You know I appreciate that, brotha

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2b2b2

Beautiful Creation brah.....you make babies wit this one...lol....ONE....thanks for sharing!

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hymnagen

2b, you got jokes, bruh! But for real' after my vent on current events, I felt the need for a more mellow read. Thanks for your consistent encouragement!

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LP45

Decent. Nice work.

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love_supreme

Very nice

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