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life 1 min read 623 views Apr 15, 2015

Hidden bottles

you’re getting on my nerves

slurring your words

I think

you had too much to drink

I’m not calling you an alcoholic

I’m calling you a drunk

you can hardly stand up

I can’t break your fall

you need to hit bottom

you need an intervention

you need to listen

everybody hates you

I’m the only one

standing by you

look at yourself

everyone hides from you

when you’re on a binge

you come up missing

I’m the only one

who goes out and looks

for you

you need help

I’m here for you

not to enable you

my love is tough for you

when they put you down

I stood up for you

so many times you

let me down

trying to show you

I really care

you’re killing me

is anybody feeling me?

I feel you leaving me

it’s hard for me to reach you

I know you’re

in there some…where

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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debbieownsthis

Whoaaa! what an ink, kinda hit home for me. Very clear message indeed, and I hope they get the help, that they need, and deserve! Amazing poetic u delivered, I love when a poet let it all out, and that u did... Jah bless

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message

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DeeliteNMe

Beautiful!!! I love the message!!!

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Ak rio

Nice poem good stuff

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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