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life 2 min read 783 views Apr 16, 2015

Love Potion

 

 

you’re a story teller

telling stories to me

I don’t know what to believe

fact fictions make believe

you’re making me believe

I’m in visioning

the colorful imagery

in your suggestive poetry 

suggesting that we come together

collide and collaborate

your words my words enmeshed 

can you imagine turning over stones

in a lot filled with dry bones

discovering uncovering what hides

behind the writing on the wall

let it all fall down on me I’m allright

it’s only a injury another wound to bleed

on the pieces of paper on my floor

I’m old school every once in a while I hit keys

It’s much easier to backspace & delete

I like my poetry in between the sheets

where a nice and slow flow puts me to sleep

then you appear in a lucid dream

up all night listening to you recite to me

I wanna open my  eyes up but I don't want to peek 

 look at u, you got me smiling in my sleep

baby, you could hush a crying baby by singing

a lullaby a cradlesong you’re so pretty babe

I love your ditty babe how bout it babe

your rhyme on top of my rhyme

my rhyme on top of your rhyme

I like the sound of that babe

 me love you long time

 

 

 

 

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KingQadarDwon'

This is truly amazing... Earthquake and superior skills...#muchrespect..

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catmartan

Phenomenal Craft ! Thanks for the share

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royale jones

Man I missed your work bruh great piece. Bought me home.

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2b2b2

FAN-TASTIC Capture....STANDING OH!!!

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Dope

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