deep in my mind's womb,
in the web of pregnant hope,
silent words linger.
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CATEGORY
just different
deep in my mind's womb,
in the web of pregnant hope,
silent words linger.
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Poetiq1der says: Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...This is a fabulous Haiku. One thing that I tend to notice about those who endeavor to write Haiku is, they don't take the time to research the form, and the underlying mindset of Haiku...Not so in your case my Friend and Brother...This piece stayed true to the Spirit of Haiku....with a beautiful and profound message to boot. I applaud you.... |
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mlowe5 says: Thank you, Brother Poetiq1der. I have studied both the traditional as well as several "modern" formats of the Haiku. I prefer the old classical format which I find to be more challenging and provides greater profundity. Your uplifting feedback is most appreciative. Peace and Lowe, mlowe5 |
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mlowe5 says: shout out to love_supreme. Peace and Love. |
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