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life 1 min read 674 views Apr 30, 2015

I Cry My Tears Upon Paper

I don't know why I let this life take the best of me As if I was drowning My heart will not become a mount I'm lost in darkness without a light Unbroken from tragedy trying to end my life I'm scared and confused so, I cry my tears upon paper... Life hasn't been that easy on me Many years I went without a family Causing my tears to fear and hide away deep within A lost shadow trying to find a way home The thought of failure so, I cry my tears upon paper... I shall not give up but yet i emulate the bear So I dare myself to care for myself I challenge my mind to enjoy the time I protect my heart to not love from the start so I cry my tears upon paper

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