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just different 1 min read 716 views May 1, 2015

Beauty is her name

There are alot of things a man cant explain, because i mean what does a woman look like if Beauty is her name... Blinded by the foremost finest of them alone I walked the seven seas believing how could something so right feel wrong Somehow my destiny seems to get the best of me and the rest is confused in affection but my heart is in the right direction Who defines Beauty? She does and no man can ever say different no matter who his woman was... I stood on top of water carving Beauty into my chest Yes ill take her and settle for nothing less Some look at Beauty as a fashion but i consider it a passion The desire of a woman, so what do you consider love? When you tell your woman you love her, who are you really thinking of? So dont look at fashion and passion as being the same because if you haven't got it by now Beauty is her name...

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love_supreme

These are true words. This is an excellent write.

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love_supreme

These are true words. This is an excellent write.

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2b2b2

Tight piece!! Thanks for sharing, well played....ONE

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DallasCowgirl

This is good!

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