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The Brotherhood of The Nod

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Wherever we go we take mental notes –

survey our surroundings like recon missions.

Most adept at playing our positions.

Without a sound we both speak and listen –

a “Roger that” with a quick chin lift and

an immediate return to park.

 

This innocuous gesture marks

our membership, for we are a part

of the Brotherhood of the Nod.

Our order is fraternal.

Whether we tuck a Wall Street Journal

in our pit, or perch a chew stick between our lips,

sport hard bottoms or Timbs,

spring wool or denim on our limbs,

the gesture informs…

The man inside his uniform

is a Brother from the set of Nod.

 

This is how we initially engage

before unwitting eyes on the public stage.

No fist bumps.  No pounds. Just the quick up and down

of the melanated mandible. It’s clearly understandable –

“I don’t know you, but I acknowledge you,

My Brother of the Nod.”

 

Bald head or dread, light skin or dark,

this chin lift conveys we are Brothers at heart

navigating terrain that is dangerous.

Despite being nameless

to each other, we recognize we are Brothers,

so we Nod.

 

This maneuver strikes some as peculiar.

Their unease uncovered

by the fear that we might, in fact,

all know each other.

Jumping to conclusions that their exclusion

must mean revolution is afoot

to exact retribution for what they took

from the Brothers who Nod to each other

in peace while we dwell in the land of the beast!

Acknowledging the humanity of each

with a simple nod of solidarity.

 

-HymnAgen

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EmpressRee says:

YES!! this unity that needs no voice. The beating of the drums to show we are understood. our tribe recognizing tribe.
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2b2b2 says:

OUTSTANDING CAPTURE HYMNAGEN....yep, yup!!!
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hymnagen says:

Indeed, EmpressRee. Especially in environments where we are clearly the minority! Thanks for reading and commenting, my sista.

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hymnagen says:

2b, my brotha **nod**
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KingQadarDwon' says:

Awesomeness at its finest.... All unity and respect....
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Charles2 says:

Four square

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Sol

 

DallasCowgirl says:

#Respect!

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hymnagen says:

KingQadarDwon', Charles2, underhiswings7 Thank you

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