“Pen wouldn't move til now Current eventz got me feelin some kinda way”

Site rankGENERAL

Awards

Karma 124,700 Contest winner ×1 Blood stone Lightness in the dark

Poems snapshot

183Total poems
155,664Lifetime views
0Last 7 days
0Last 30 days
0Last 90 days
0Last 365 days

Join free to nominate, save, follow and join this poet's camp.

just different 2 min read 853 views May 5, 2015

The Brotherhood of The Nod

Wherever we go we take mental notes –

survey our surroundings like recon missions.

Most adept at playing our positions.

Without a sound we both speak and listen –

a “Roger that” with a quick chin lift and

an immediate return to park.

 

This innocuous gesture marks

our membership, for we are a part

of the Brotherhood of the Nod.

Our order is fraternal.

Whether we tuck a Wall Street Journal

in our pit, or perch a chew stick between our lips,

sport hard bottoms or Timbs,

spring wool or denim on our limbs,

the gesture informs…

The man inside his uniform

is a Brother from the set of Nod.

 

This is how we initially engage

before unwitting eyes on the public stage.

No fist bumps.  No pounds. Just the quick up and down

of the melanated mandible. It’s clearly understandable –

“I don’t know you, but I acknowledge you,

My Brother of the Nod.”

 

Bald head or dread, light skin or dark,

this chin lift conveys we are Brothers at heart

navigating terrain that is dangerous.

Despite being nameless

to each other, we recognize we are Brothers,

so we Nod.

 

This maneuver strikes some as peculiar.

Their unease uncovered

by the fear that we might, in fact,

all know each other.

Jumping to conclusions that their exclusion

must mean revolution is afoot

to exact retribution for what they took

from the Brothers who Nod to each other

in peace while we dwell in the land of the beast!

Acknowledging the humanity of each

with a simple nod of solidarity.

 

-HymnAgen

Discussions (0)

No discussions yet. Start one to ask about a line, share what the poem meant to you, or talk craft with other members.

Log in to start a discussion about this poem.

Comments (8)

Join free to commentPoets read every comment, and every one you leave earns karma. Registration is FREE.

Join free Log in
Contest winner

EmpressRee

YES!! this unity that needs no voice. The beating of the drums to show we are understood. our tribe recognizing tribe.

Read EmpressRee's poems
Contest winner

2b2b2

OUTSTANDING CAPTURE HYMNAGEN....yep, yup!!!

Read 2b2b2's poems
Contest winner

hymnagen

Indeed, EmpressRee. Especially in environments where we are clearly the minority! Thanks for reading and commenting, my sista.

Read hymnagen's poems
Contest winner

hymnagen

2b, my brotha **nod**

Read hymnagen's poems
Contest winner

KingQadarDwon'

Awesomeness at its finest.... All unity and respect....

Read KingQadarDwon''s poems
Contest winner

Charles2

Four square

Read Charles2's poems

DallasCowgirl

#Respect!

Read DallasCowgirl's poems
Contest winner

hymnagen

KingQadarDwon', Charles2, underhiswings7 Thank you

Read hymnagen's poems

login below

Forgot your username?

 
Poets read every comment. Join free to comment, follow and save poems. Join free