“Trying To Reach Space”

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life 1 min read 586 views May 12, 2015

Out Of The Box

way too elevated

bars intoxicated

even mars is persuaded

I don't belong on earth

I evacuated on the spaceship

marksman penmanship

cruising on the strip

eventually seated on the moon

where I can potentially presume in the middle of the afternoon

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