“Trying To Reach Space”

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just different 1 min read 690 views Jul 10, 2015

Character Renovation

I had failed to retain that section in my life

I used to blame for my imperfection strife

though I was in hunt of correction

I had lost all affection, it was difficult to tame agression

the absent sessions left me stressing

I was in pursuit to regroup

was headed nowhere fast

and so my firsthand task was ridding my surrounding cast

which was utterly influential and smothering my potentials

after a hard observation in the glass

following was character renovation

and so I massacred the mask

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DallasCowgirl

Very well expressed, brother!

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LP45

Great flow Borhyme. Nice write. Thank you for sharing this.

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2b2b2

FANTASTIC Scribe....ha ha....well played....ONE

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love_supreme

Excellent write.

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