“Trying To Reach Space”

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life 1 min read 564 views May 17, 2015

Oh Love

from the fire love, 

to the affair in the pub

 

commitment rush

 cant explain why i leave her

 untouched

 

it's insane

what used to be a hell hot flame

now to a flicker

 

 

the chronical  bicker

 she feels resentment

 

 

  i dont intend to leave her

 in discontentment

 

 

 after so many years

 

 how can she love me the same way

  cold to her tears

 

how could my heart just runaway

yet she talks to me ,I have nothing to say

 

 

  I havent any solutions but aim to embrace change

 

observing her constitution expresses to me' I'm a strain

 why cant i feel her pain

 

there for the duration

she's patient

 

the way of love a woman have for a man

i can never understand

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