“Trying To Reach Space”

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life 1 min read 644 views May 22, 2015

Homeless

days, nights

when the moonlight proceeded

the anxiety stampeded my cerebrum

folks claimed piety but was nowhere when I needed them

ignited wood fires, indicted thermal attire

in public restrooms with soap

hope was still afloat

temporary chapter with an ego fracture

but in these times and sessions

I realized after rising out this storm

to count each and every blessing

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mrmelody7

Hear you loud and clear one thing about it, builds character and you know from experience not too much you are afraid to face. Good write for these testy times

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The Immortal Wize

You captured the subject very well, folks claimed piety but was nowhere when I needed them...ain't that a bright light shining in the dark. AWESOME!!!

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2b2b2

Tight Capture...thanks for sharing...Namaste

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love_supreme

I like this poem.

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