These Temptations
eightball tapping on my window at a crescendo
pornography performing choreography
herb tip toe in on the curb
gambling is chronically rambling
Lord help not to lose sight of what I'm obligated to be handling
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eightball tapping on my window at a crescendo
pornography performing choreography
herb tip toe in on the curb
gambling is chronically rambling
Lord help not to lose sight of what I'm obligated to be handling
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Powerful message brother.. We are surrounded by temptations daily... Write on.. I know the struggle..
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Profound! It gets like that sometimes, Brother. The struggle to do the right has never been easy---handling our obligation has never been a piece of cake or a tall glass of water. Only to sit and do nothing has been so. Write on Brother and keep handling and fueling the flame of the candle of obligation. Peace, Love and Unity.
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