“Trying To Reach Space”

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life 1 min read 545 views May 26, 2015

Stormy Blues

rain boxing the windowsill

thunder stomping the roof top

lightening stampede in the field

this time I proceed without the crop

blues massaging my brain

such a soothe

this Ella Fitzgerald mood

removed from the strain and stress

only just space and rest

absent from society's severity

free from anxiety just momentarily

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The Immortal Wize

When in need, rain can sometimes be a friend in indeed.

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mrmelody7

Rain its therapy at its best

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mlowe5

Yes Sir! Love the melodic flow and the blues rhythms of the words---all as beautiful as that of falling rain: "How I wish it would rain..." Peace, Love and Unity.

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DallasCowgirl

You got some real talent, bro. Thanks for sharing

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