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just different 1 min read 846 views May 28, 2015

Good Morning Soul...

Good morning soul

Today I’m gone to write

a poem that simply suggested

its self to me last night.

 

It will be a poem of joyous tears

for the two sons I dearly miss--

sons that gave my life so much bliss.

 

Oh I wish this poem

would flood its self

with their many loving words

and charming acts---

that all the world could see

why God so dearly wanted them back.

 

But let me not push

this poem to any type of limitation,

for it’s not a wailing, pitiful lamentation

of a heart painful and sad---

rather, it’s a praise poem to the Giver

for granting us all the crazy fun we had.

 

Good morning soul.

This poem could never cover

all those wonderful short years---years,

filling this old heart with such joy and laughter

and flooding these old orbs with grateful tears.

 

Yeah, tha Lawd giveth; and tha Lawd taketh away.

Blessed be tha Name of tha Lawd each and evah day! 

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KingQadarDwon'

Wow.. Great piece.. Great attitude to be forever grateful.. Everything and everybody is apart of the perfect plan...

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love_supreme

Excellent write.

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mlowe5

Thanks to you, KingQadarDwon' and latin_lover for the read and feedback. Much Peace, Love and Unity

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Charles2

Much, much... vision... wisdom... appreciation spiritual calling ...here... echoes, of the love, mixed with tears ...of strength...

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mlowe5

So mote it be. Thanks for the beautiful feedback, Charles2. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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mlowe5

Many thanks, love_supreme. Peace and Love. mlowe5

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love_supreme

I like this poem.

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