“Trying To Reach Space”

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life 1 min read 612 views Jun 2, 2015

Summer Summer Summer

dog days, birds fly, sky rage

autumnal equinox

body detoxification

crustaceans beneath the boardwalk

the creaks under the feet

sandcastles

life's hassles blowing in the summer breeze

rattled nerves drowned in Sangria

watching the curves on Maria

at the butt of the day

the swing and sway in the hammock

it's a beautiful sunset

 

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mrmelody7

cant beat that for a summer break um Ice cold sangria in a hammock serenity at its best

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2b2b2

Excellently played....One

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mlowe5

Yes indeed; the swing and sway of summer time---reaping the fruits of sown seeds of spring. Beautiful!

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DallasCowgirl

Nice capture!!

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love_supreme

Very nice

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