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life 1 min read 576 views Jun 6, 2015

11:49 pm

Another night in the maze I call my mind
Took a wrong turn at lovers lane
I am not sure what I will find
Down this road
Lead by my heavy heart, lonely soul, no self control
Followed by my past mistakes and the promises I’ve broke
How did I get here?
Influenced by my fears
Wading in a pool of thoughts
I am now drowning in her tears
Lost in a memory
Familiar outcome ahead of me
I’ve relived this many times yet still anticipate a different ending
Just another night in this maze I call my mind
Lost on this train of thought
Not sure what I will find
Down this road
Lead by a heavy heart, lonely soul, no self control
I’ll retrace my steps
Still unsure which way to go

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LP45

Awesome! I liked this. It has great imagery and a decent flow. Write on sandyperry. Thanks for sharing.

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davoice

Woooooo! You killed it.....Loving it.

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davoice

Woooooo! You killed it.....Loving it.

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Sandyperry

Thank you

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BoRhyme

Deep! Felt the hurt!!!

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DallasCowgirl

Never read this, but I just realized that this poem is very similar to the one I just posted. Know that feeling, bro. Great piece!

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