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thatygpoetickidd
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that awful night prt1

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she wonders why everything is moving so slow unaware of what's happened she gets up and looks into the mirror her hair is a mess and it looks like she's been crying all night she begins to question the last thing she did before she went to sleep she turns around and looks at her bed to  see that there was a empty bottle of exclusive she sits on the edge of the bed with the bottle in hand thoughts are slowly starting to unravel about what happend she looks at the bottle one more time and puts it down she lays bacc down with her hands behind her head as she closes her eyes so she can get a better picture of what happened she gets a ten second glimpse of the things she remembers went on she don't do drugs and but she is a drinker thinking to herself that's what probably made her memories all fussy she takes a deep breath and turns over to see something she consider strange so she got up and walked to her closet and found a money clip with it was six hundred dollars and and a note on it that said thanks for the good time so now in her head she Is panicking but her actions are calm she heads back to her bed but before she took another step forward she stood still as if she knew another presence was in the room with her so she turns back to the closet opens it to find out there was a man with a camera in his hand she ran to the bed and grab the gun from up under the bed where she had put it in her shoe box almost instantly she was filled with a mixture of rage and fear she yells out who the hell are you and that he had about ten seconds to answer before she shoots and calls the police so with a trimble sound in his voice he sad calm down he hands her the camera slowly and runs out she locks the door behind him and sits back on her bed she turns on the camera and sees pictures of her being naked and held by two guys while the other two was taking advantage of her she saw herself try to fight back but they over powered her the guys who were there grab a shot glass and poured her a shot of exclusive but they put a drag in it the drug is self is called blue dream it's a muscle relaxer and calms the nerves making the body very hard to function properly she screams out loud but one of the guys slapped her and forced the drink down her throat they each took turns raping her then one of them heard the police come they all scattered but one of them hid in the closet after she got done watching the video she broke down she just sat on her bed rocking herself as her face was filled with endless tears she got up looked in the mirror and threw the bottle of exclusive at it what she saw wasn't even her any more all she saw was just a nightmare as pieces of the mirror fell she sees her reflection one last time she stands over the broken glass that resombl her life the shattered remains in the mirror said revenge without hesitation she grabs a fragment of the broken glass and begins to cut her hair in order to commit to the perfect revenge plan her head had to be cleared completely she cleaned up around her house and swept up the floor she got in the shower and relived that whole in tire night she remembers the faces of the people who did this to her but she didn't know their names she gets out the shower drys off and brushes her teeth after that she puts on some clothes she hears someone knocking on her door she answers it...it was two offers one of them had said that someone had filed a complaint about the loud nose and that other people thought they heard shattered glass she assured them that everything was all right in the back of her she didn't want to lead suspension or be questioned she closes the door and and heads to the kitchen to fix something to eat only to get distracted by what she had planned she took out some paper and a pen to write the pros and cons the first thing she listed was going to prison for man slotter she had originally plan on killing all of five of them she even went out her to think about exactly how she was going to kill them but after a few doubts and thinking it all the way threw she changed her mind all she wanted to do was torture them the way they did her she knew that if she was ever going to get them back for what they had done that she would need some connections for what she had planned

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DallasCowgirl says:

waiting....

 

thatygpoetickidd says:

for what lol
 

DallasCowgirl says:

The rest!

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