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life 1 min read 571 views Jul 15, 2015

Loyalty vs. Love

 

 

I mistook your loyalty for love...you stood by me in the midst of my pain and I thought you loved me...but you were just being loyal to me..I misunderstood your intentions and made them to be what I wanted them to be.....You were loyal to me unconditionally...you seen the good Woman in me and I became loyal to you and fell in love with you...but it was your loyalty that drew me in to you...your love for me grew minimal. Your loyalty to me stayed plentiful...your sex with me was gradual...my making love to you was sensual...as we grew together...we grew apart...now we are together for circumstance...don't know for sure if we have a chance...you dance with me and I dance with you...but we are both dancing to our own separate tunes...you say you love me and I believe that...your loyalty has unforeseen that...I’m gradually moving from you...turning my loyalty to myself...turning my love to myself...taking the hate that I have for you...and turning it into something new...loyalty is true...loyalty is you...loving me was misused. But that was my fault to...I thought your loyalty was love...I am a good Woman..  just no longer good for you...

 

 

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2b2b2

AWESOME WORK.......thanks for sharing....BRAVO!!!

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Fm110comphodent

Loyalty is not as though you were left without an example. However, you distinguish the tears of unfulfilling the burning house that is harboring the analysis that is out of sync with the time. Ill go through some more pieces that you shared.

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