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just different 1 min read 654 views Jul 24, 2015

Question

what would we do

if we all had just one more chance

 

to rectify those problems

we have ignored, perpetuated,

 

or left behind

for someone else to fix

 

by the edge of the water  

we gather   

 

to carry forth thru our collective burdens,

worries and concerns we all share


do you believe that we all must carry

the cross which we have created in our lives

 

Lifted by the burdens which we have endured

do you believe?

 

for the creator has paid in full 

the sacrifice and shown us by example

 

surely the way is clear

we suffer, struggle, falter  

 

fall and rise again

the toils  the trials and tribulations

 

which define our character

and we endure the troubles we all share


can you see in the world that surrounds us

the people with whom we share existence

 

although we may differ in belief

we are all fed from the same source


(do you believe)

C2

 

 

 

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KingQadarDwon'

Brilliant powerful message..Thanks for sharing

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Charles2

thank you

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hymnagen

Thought provoking...as a good question should be

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Charles2

thank you, hymnagen

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