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just different 1 min read 528 views Jul 28, 2015

blues...

Sorry,

Home crew

I kinda feel a little misty eyed

…a little sad and blue...

Like going somewhere really loud

To drown out

these disconcerting echoes

of a love i’ve all but lost

No matter what I try to say or do

Or even find a quiet place

To let the dying echoes fade

To have a few cold brews

and listen to

...some Jimi Hendrix,

"Machine Gun"

...and steal a moment or two

To drift and dream away

a little while,

Before the lost vision

I have leaves my mind

one last time

and fades to nothing dust

And my tears explode

inside my fallen mane

And evaporate like the clouds

on a sunny summer day

...my hopes and fears

mix and mingle with my tears

Like snowflakes lost in a blizzard

on a dark, cold...

chilling to the bone

turn your heart to stone

soul killing...

stormy night

 

The last failing whispers

Of the last time

I heard the words,

"i love you"

 

C2

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