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just different 1 min read 534 views Aug 6, 2015

layers...

i remember times ago

moments we used to have

spent together

holding hands, making plans

nothing

ever came between us

nothing

we would not share

i could always tell

that 

you really cared

now, that you are gone

they all seem so far away

 

so 

many yesterdays

memories that keep

haunting me

peeling back the layers

of where 

we used to be

playing it back over,

and over 

and over again

 

the love 

i feel for you

thankful for everything

you've 

ever done for me

 

you brought me back to myself

brought out a part of me

 

someone 

i'd never known

 

laying on a blanket 

counting stars

 

while 

looking straight

into 

your eyes

 

peeling back layers

of the memories

 

no more lazy walks

no more quiet talks

no more you and i

 

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