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life 1 min read 493 views Aug 8, 2015

Within You

As I walked along in search of the sun

I encountered many beautiful faces speaking many beautiful languages

Falling ever in love with horizons far beyond; footsteps lost in the poetry of where He had gone

Then unto me came the smile of a sunflower with darkness in its eyes

Why I am not waiting to see if and when will the stars align

Why I am not cursing from dusk till dawn

Because even in the absolute pitch of night I can feel Him

Dispreading my eyelids like petals that have sworn He’s abandoned

I do not know why so many continue staring out in vain

When God is right there within...

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Charles2

nice story line. good development. nice timing for the ending

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rie_cee

nice!!!

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2b2b2

Perfect Capture....thanks for sharing! Bravo.....ONE

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