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just different 1 min read 591 views Aug 10, 2015

My Indifferent Love

I'm selfish, impatient, I make mistakes, I am out of control and hard to handle.

Can't handle me at my worst, don't deserve me at my best, Dance when nobody is watching,

Love like I'll never be hurt,

Sing like nobody listening,

It's heaven on earth “Darkness cannot drive out darkness:  Hate cannot drive .

Never do they hurt, feelings  make you feel like you are not good enough, build you up and show you things about yourself.

There is pressure, jealousy, competition and yet a quiet calmness. Things insignificant to most are invaluable treasures kept in your heart, forever the indifference.

The art of ugliness, is indifference. The opposite of faith is indifference. And the opposite of life is not death, it's a soul that remains to the end indifferent.

I do not know any other way of loving but this, in which there is no I or you, so intimate that your hand upon my chest is my hand, so intimate when I fall asleep whose eyes close.”

 

 

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DallasCowgirl

Always on point. Glad you decided to post! Thanks for sharing.

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Wordman21

Thank You so much...

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shadchan

An honest soul-searching poem. Very brave. Indifference is the opposite of love is so true.

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Fm110comphodent

Patience is very close to the blend of love making. I see in your writing that you have a part to observe the subject towards tantalizing the echoes

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Wordman21

Thank you all for the feedback/comments...

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bekz580

Wonderful!

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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