“Ramblings of a slight maniac, heart of a hopeless romantic. Visions of a possible prophet, sometimes i feel that ive lost it ”

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just different 2 min read 903 views Sep 2, 2015

Churnings of the Mind Pressing of the Times

Ramblings of a slight true maniac, heart of a hopless romantic.

Visions of  possible prophet, sometimes i feel that ive lost it ... sanity ... Ever fleeting sanity ... sweetly decieving sanity ... Barely ... rarelly meeting sanity.

Living vividely, stradeling a thin line ... happily.

Id rather live out loud in color than to merely exist in menotinous grey. id rather live through blissful love rather than smother my light till it wastes away.

Our way of life fools us ... almost trains us from a young age ... that rgularity is acceptable.

Teaches us to muffle our cries ... Teaches us to stiffel curiosities ... Teaches us to smother our screams ... walk in in neat lines untill we die.

Crying out in the night I shake myself from dreams o large metal hands clamped over my mouth ...      

Dreams of large metal drones burning crops and causidng drouts ... Herded like animals we obliviously allow "lifestyle" to strangle our true inner selves.

Shot your third eye in the head ... people walking around not even knowing theyre spirtually dead.

Id rather live crazily than die quietly ...

I am a Queen and I will stnd mightilly.

My flame will burn brightly, I will love lie wildly, I will serve the universe selflesly , grasping hope and faith tightly.                                                                                                     

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Number3

Inspiring piece. Word Up Kelee!

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Just_Me_Kelee

Thanx, appreciate it

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mlowe5

What a beautiful capture! Read it two times to assure the powerful message. Please accept my honest feedback (the teacher in me). Even in free verse--culturally as well--there is still a syntax; thus once a poem has burst from the creative womb of mind, like the offspring it is, we must yet prepare it for the world; check it out to make sure its message is clear--that the WORD speaks not only profoundly, but also clearly. Thanks for sharing this powerful and beautiful piece. I look forward to reading more. Peace, Love and Unity.

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Just_Me_Kelee

tanx for the feedback mlowe5, greatly appreciated

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