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just different 2 min read 469 views Sep 23, 2015

the irony

 

I love you, let me stop that lying I mean I love me I love the thought of me being happy. I love the thought of me laying you down and looking into your eyes seeing that moment of weakness in your defenses I love the thought of knowing everything you want in that moment my passion collides with my pride but I set that aside I love you let me stop that lying I love the thought of me giving you that pleasure you desire but what I love more is the thought of you asking for more. Poor thing you don’t know what you’re getting yourself into but I know what I’m getting myself into a Spring Valley Ocean is what it feels like refreshing to my body is what it feels like but I’m never cooling down because we always warming up you sit up thinking asking yourself do he love me well I love you let me stop that lying I love the thought of you crying I love the thought of you feeling like your dying I love you no wait let me stop that lying I mean wait let me stop that denying let me stop you from crying no wait let me stop you from dying damn. And now I hate myself no let me stop that lying I hate that my actions drove you to your action like a shofar and now I’m crying 

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