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just different 1 min read 496 views Oct 20, 2015

crawl space

I don’t ever want to talk

About us ever again but i will

It sucks that what we had has been broken

and we had not even built it yet

In the planning stages for three years

The architectural drawings,

mechanical, electrical and lighting plans are ruined

What we have left …is devastation

All in ruins and we did it together

I brought the winds…

and you brought the water

Hurricane Katrina took one demon

away from me and brought another

First, you drew out

my heartfelt emotions and i got hooked

Circumstantial conditions

were inherently misaligned

creating a confusion of conflicting goals

and a deliberate untruth a conspiracy

which served to imbalance and to torment me

Inconsistent with principles supposedly

We supported with each other

But a lie, multiplies like fire and

I got burned, twice

Now i am looking for a crawlspace

Until my heart can be

…healed…

C2

 

 

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