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long distance 1 min read 738 views Oct 23, 2015

Yet To Be Determined

I'm not a girl

Not yet a woman

But I swear 

Ill feelings can take you

There

When you become 

Visually impaired with the

Obstacles that 

Life brings to you

Finally

I see it has happened to me

Right in front of my face

Used to feel 

Uninspired

My past hurts have left my heart

Mired

Unwilling to be a fool ever again

Again

I begin

Again

Not yet a woman

Tryna dodge

Spears

but seem to get 

Federlined

Another line

Another dime

But only time will tell if this truly is 

Divine

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Charles2

Wonderful journey in the path

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mrmelody7

Keep at it you will figure it all out-nice write

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Alekia Abeni

Charles2 thank you for taking the lyrical journey with me!

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Alekia Abeni

Getting better all the time mrmelody7.... Thank you so much for vibing with me!

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love_supreme

Very nice

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