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life 1 min read 594 views Nov 20, 2015

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I committed crime, why

just to kill some time

time that was only wasted

behind peeled, steel gray doors

and whitewashed brick walls

tea parties with baby dolls

no heads, missing legs, broken bodies

talking bout, "when I get out"

"when I get out"

I'm gonna eat this, eat that

"when I get out"

I'm going to do this, do that

part over here

party over there

party all the time

see, the world wasn't a good place

when we left it

if it was, we would have kept it

 

 

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