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life 1 min read 626 views Nov 21, 2015

Sup

babies cry

hurting mothers do too

deadbeat dads die long before

you have a chance to bond

trying to live life without

is like walking with your shoes untied

who can call you barefoot

your shoes are black

with white strings attached

your toes are cold

your nose is red

it has not bled

holding a sweet cookie

in your hand

one bite

tells you, the cookies bland

 

 

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mrmelody7

Urban livin it bees that way you always show what livin in the Hood is really like for those who have no idea or really even care

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