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life 1 min read 547 views Nov 21, 2015

Turn me loose

brother I'm gone

you don't have to worry bout me

not that you ever did

you were a selfish little kid

you have not, changed much

thanks for the free lunch

but, did you know I

paid for the groceries that you ate

every morsel on your plate

you treated me like I was the maid

talked to me like I was your slave

do you know how that feels

acting like you're

king of the hill

how can that be

when you could barely 

pay your bills

tell the truth

what did I ever do to you

it's not my fault, I know

mama didn't give enough love to you

I know it's the cause of everything

like not getting enough

oxygen to your brain

it's nothing to complain

we both feel the same

pains

coming from the same things

 

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