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life 1 min read 563 views Nov 23, 2015

heavy load

wishy, washy

like a washing machine

one day you're rinsing

another day you're spinning

past the age of 30

all that washing 

and your loads still dirty

your spin cycles too long

your rinse cycle don't get out

the scum

you're starting to fall apart

like you have some loose screws

missing some parts

it won't be long before you're done

sitting out on the curve

for heavy trash pick up

you've done your job

to the best of your ability

with a load of humility

so keep your lid up

until it falls down

 

 

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