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The Immortal Wize

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If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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I seen the worse that could happen

the worse did happen

just like I saw it happen

I told every one, it was going to happen

it happened just like I told them it would happen

no one believed me when I told them, it would happen 

until it happened but it was too late for them

because they would not listen to me

when I told them, the worse that could happen

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tjaigreen says:

I feel you. I really like how the repetition drives the point home.

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mrmelody7 says:

The happening is it real is it fake, the happening as song by the Supremes
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hymnagen says:

THIS is fiyah hot!

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