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life 1 min read 688 views Dec 7, 2015

Lisping

I seen the worse that could happen

the worse did happen

just like I saw it happen

I told every one, it was going to happen

it happened just like I told them it would happen

no one believed me when I told them, it would happen

until it happened but it was too late for them

because they would not listen to me

when I told them, the worse that could happen

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