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life 1 min read 600 views Dec 9, 2015

Fatback

check the facts

trim the fat

looking good

ready for Hollywood

don't mind if I do

don't mind if you would

under clear

understood

I am no fan of man

that's where I stand

where I once stood

mistaken and misunderstood

by those who would

thought they could but, never did

I live my life on the edge

it's not hard to fall off

always ready to war

so call the truce off

my army is bigger than your army

so call your troops off

countdown, it's time for liftoff

 

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DallasCowgirl

Nice wordplay. Thanks for sharing.

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I like this poem.

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