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life 1 min read 543 views Dec 13, 2015

Talking Loud

are you talking to me

you're not making any since

you're opening your mouth

it's just a lot of noise coming out

as if you swallowed a crowd

I can't stand a lot of static

on the radio, please change

the station, it's blocking my flow

I'm in a storm where wind don't blow

a lot of windows and a lot of doors

a lot bodies on the floor

a lot of people talking loud

I can't find my face in the crowd

waiting for some kind of change

it's going to take a while

how long is awhile

how long does it take to smile

this is entrapment

no salt and pepper on the table

what happen to the napkins

what happen to my life

what went wrong

it use to be right

 

 

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I feel you, I don't like a lot of noise either!

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