The Immortal Wize

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Talking Loud

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are you talking to me

you're not making any since

you're opening your mouth

it's just a lot of noise coming out

as if you swallowed a crowd

I can't stand a lot of static

on the radio, please change

the station, it's blocking my flow

I'm in a storm where wind don't blow

a lot of windows and a lot of doors

a lot bodies on the floor

a lot of people talking loud

I can't find my face in the crowd

waiting for some kind of change

it's going to take a while

how long is awhile

how long does it take to smile

this is entrapment

no salt and pepper on the table

what happen to the napkins

what happen to my life

what went wrong

it use to be right

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		ThePoetess says: I feel you, I don't like a lot of noise either! poems by this commentor I Wanna Cum Thirsty... Wetter Than Water...

OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY The Immortal Wize

I'm Gonna Need You (08032026)

one day I'm gonna need you to hold my hand one day I'm gonna need you to help me stand I'm gonna need you to help me do all the things I done for myself without no one's help one day I'm gonna need you to hold my hand one day I'm gonna need you to help me stand I'm gonna need you to help me do all the things I done for myself without no one's help one day I'm gonna need you to answer the phone one day I'm gonna need you to respond to the text I'm gonna need you to do a wellness check one day I'm gonna need you to come through I'm gonna need you to stop by but you won't be here you won't lift me up you won't answer the phone you won't check on me you won't respond to the text you won't help me do all the things I once did for myself without help from no one else

TIW 7/31/26

" Its a set up to up set you if you get up set it wins."

Stream of Consciousness

you taught me how to survive you keep teaching me how to get by how can I lose when I know how to win when I switched from pencil to pen I made mistakes I couldn't erase you told me to do it over again I got frustrated I really did hate it you taught me how to behave you told me to make the grades I studied hard to make you proud of me you told me you would be proud of me degree or no degree as long as I achieve you told me to prosper before I knew the meaning of the word I looked it up wrote it down impressed the meaning in my mind you told me to draw a line through impossible you wanted me to believe it's possible you told me don't sit around waiting for opportunity to knock on the door you told me to get up go out and get what's mine you told me to name it you told me to claim it you told me I had to be invested you taught me how to manifest it you taught me alot of lessons some I still remember some I forgot no matter what I can't say I didn't have someone in my life who want...

TIW 7/29/26

"I talk to the squawk and the squawk, squawks to me."

TIW 7/29/26

"The ground only wins if you decide it is a bed instead of a launchpad."

TIW 7/29/26

"Life tells you to survive, then whispers in your ear, you're going to die."

TIW 7/29/26

"The only evidence of wasted time is the mess we make and the time it takes to clean it up."

TIW 7/29/26

"Which came first, the pen or the paper? There's no write answer."

TIW 7/29/26

"A quote is a note to self."

TIW 7/29/26

"The tricky thing about time is it's always too late."

Talking Loud

I'm Gonna Need You (08032026)

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Stream of Consciousness

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