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life 1 min read 573 views Dec 13, 2015

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I'm going for broke

risk it all

before I die

I'll have it all

I tell no lie

I looked my enemy

in the eye

feet on the ground

never backed down

stand up, for mines

I drew the line

please don't cross

I had to face

a lot of loss

a lot of betrayal

a lot of wood and 

a lot of nails

all my haters

can go, straight to hell

I'm up the hill

fetching a pale

pushed, by Jill

 I never fell

in order to succeed

I had to fail

I fail fast

It didn't last

landed face first

on a patch of grass

 

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